by Tainted Beauty Jan 2, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The moon cast a shadow upon the wedding ground, |
Brillaint, great imergry and well written. dont really see any faults with it. |
by HOLLY ARMER
This is good, it has a very creepy element to it. The only suggestion I have is that starting the first 3 lines with the word "The" is too repititious. |