Gone

by xoxShorteexox   Jan 2, 2006


Life sucks is craved into my arm.
Because my life always was a sucke thing.
You looked at my arm, and said, "Heather, I care about you, so please stop this foolishness."
I didn't say anything,
but I started to cry.
I promised to stop.
But then,
you die.
so, it started again.
My world fell to pieces,
because you were my whole world.
I listened to you because I loved you so much.
But now,
I am dead too.
Because I didn't know what to do you without you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    It was deep, sometimes I can feel that sad too at times. I liked it, Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Right heres number one! NatZzZ is rating and commenting on your poems.
    Well, this is the first poem I will comment on, brilliant, stunning and sad... the beauty entoxicates my mind!

    love ya babe,

    ~*TasH*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hun this is good.
    It has alot of emotion in it!
    Well done! xD