Hun this is good.
It has alot of emotion in it!
Well done! xD

Right heres number one! NatZzZ is rating and commenting on your poems.
Well, this is the first poem I will comment on, brilliant, stunning and sad... the beauty entoxicates my mind!

love ya babe,

~*TasH*~

It was deep, sometimes I can feel that sad too at times. I liked it, Good stuff.