Very good. Hope you and this guy can live happy forever and thanx for all your comments and stuff..well..thanx and hope to read more later.

~Matt~

Yea thats good but long hope u an that guy live good 2geather

Wow really loved this poem!! keep writing!!! maybe you can check out some of my poems even though theyre aren't as good as yours!!! xoxoxo

Hold on, its all right there in the title.
I totally dig this poem, it's sincere, and it's long(i wish i had the patience to write a long one), also i luv the style of how you write them.

I really loved this poem it's soo true! 5/5