Winter

by Karla Gordon   Jan 2, 2006


Clouds
Dark and gloomy
Hang high in the sky.

Rain
Drizzles from above
Pouring upon the earth.

Snow
It's dirty and melting
Slowly disappearing.

Trees
Stark and naked
No leaves to be seen.

Earth
Ugly, dark and grey
Wet and damp.

Spring
Life everywhere, blooming
Fresh, pretty and happy.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Beautiful poem, hon.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Ty for your comments Dreams..I really appreciate your input.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    'It's dirty and melting'
    I would suggest taking away 'It's' to maintain the consistency of the poem. It will help with the flow. Just my point of view, hope you don't mind. =)

    I enjoy this as much as the other one, it literally takes my breath away. Wonderful descriptions coupled with beautiful imaginery. Thanks for sharing another brilliant piece. =)

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