Haha that was pretty good, definately unique, and I wouldn't have seen it coming if I tried. The rhyming was good the story was good, and the ending was enjoyable. Nice job :)

Wow nice poem, when i seen the name of the poem i was like umm then i seen it in the funny poems i was umm again nice job lol great flow 5.5

Wow... interesting. very good. the end made me giggle a little. if every1 looked at "death" the way u do, maybe more ppl wud b happy. neways, very good 5/5

I really really liked this poem ah! sooo much!

Very funny and well written

This poem really lightened my spirits. I've been reading sad poems about death all day and It's more than refreshing to read one that takes a humorous tone to such a dismal topic. Great work 5/5

Thank you for bringing a smile to my face.

Keep writing
Nici

That was so funny. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Brilliant piece of wrk, def another 5 vote, I love the wording used, and the it just ncely flows keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Lmao i loved this poem!!!
Totally unexpected, didn't think it would be a funny one when you asked me to comment it, i really enjoyed reading it, makes a change from the usual ones i read. Brilliant and a definate 5/5 from me, flowed well and the rhyming was spot on. I especially liked the ending about the PTA haha :D

AHAHAHAHAHA!
This had me in giggles while reading it.
I loved the ending, I wasn't expecting it to be that.
This was very original, when I saw the title you asked me to comment I thought it was going to be a sad or dark poem I didn't expect it to be a funny one, but you did a marvelous job!