Wow hun i am soo sorry to see you hurt like this, this poem was really sad and i hope your ok if you ever need to talk and all u can email me. 5.5

I love the beginning. It hooks you right away. Very deep, very emotional. Writing is the best way to deal with your pain- not cutting. But you've probably heard all the pleas not to cut so i won't badger you with them. Kicking the habit is hard, but not impossible, however staying away is very hard trust me. Take Care and stay strong. XXXXX
JL

Wow other great poem of yours, they seem so real and are so intense. good work!
Juls

Wow, i have only read 3 of ur poems but all three are wonderfully written and have a great meaning. ur a very good writer. u r a very deep person it seems... very nice!

Wow, great poem, yet another! hope your ok...intense poem. jesx

I definatly love the beginning it made me want to read it till the end. Very good job. My only suggestion is that the last line makes it sound unfinished, like you want to say more. Other than that good job.

Wow. that was great i enjoyed reading it. it was just great.

Emma 5/5

Amazing start of the poem! The subject is very sad, I hope you won't ever hurt yourself that way as it does no good to you at all.
The poem is great, it flows more like a song. Keep it up!

DAAAAAA******NNNN Excellent Job...Whoa....Really really Realy Great job
5/5 thts all i got to say
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Amazing poem. i like it alot. 5/5 keep up the great work.

That was awesome. the title especially caught my attention.
i rlly think u are a grrt poet. keep writing.

The title is really good and so is the poem!
this is such a good idea!
xxxx

Thanks for your comment, it was a worthwhile one.

i really like the theme/s in this poem and you express it really well.

mine was an exaggerated true, btw. i hope yours is not true, because it sounds it - all yours are really great. well done!

Thanks for your comment, it was a worthwhile one.

i really like the theme/s in this poem and you express it really well.

mine was an exaggerated true, btw. i hope yours is not true, because it sounds it - all yours are really great. well done!

Wow.. that was an amazing write! it was so powerful and the metaphors and descriptions were just so detailed.. really good job! 5/5

Awh, that was so sad.. I must say that I liked the first couple of stanza's better than the ones at the end.. The descriptions and details you used were amazing.. The flow worked well and it was full of emotion! Nice job! 5/5

Awww i like this one i can totally relate nice work!!

Great poem soo sadd i got soo into it . great job 5/5!

Erin

Aw...I liked this one, I'm again so sorry.....its so sad, powerful, full of emotion... I loved it, great theme, nice write :D Amazing! :D
Always </3
SkY

That was very good but sad you should start writing again your very good 5/5