Umm..Are ya okay hun? lol it was good but really intense my eyes opened wide on this one. Great work
5/5 Juls

This is really powerful... kinda scarey but well written... nice job!

I thought this was great, i liked the fact it didnt rhyme, it suited the mood, i kinda just wrote a poem like it but its not reall finished yet...its not about death though. neways im rambling lol great work hun! jesxx