Sad Suicide Note

by Kelly   Jan 3, 2006


Her life as a child was perfect,
she used to have it all,
but nobody had really seen,
when she had begun to fall

She soon began to give up,
seeing no point in anything she did,
all her life she acted like nothing was wrong,
her depression with smiles she hid

Her friends started noticing changes,
and they offered to help her out,
but she was already too far gone,
down this unmistakably dangerous route

Her nights were filled with sorrow,
and loneliness she could hardly bear,
she wondered how she had gotten like this,
and she wondered why life wasn't fair

Sometimes while laying on her bed,
she hoped she could somehow win,
for she so desperately wanted to get out,
of this nightmare she was in

Her heart was slowly breaking,
into countless unfix able pieces,
she imagined her death putting a smile upon,
a sea of expressionless faces

One night she went over the edge,
and decided enough was enough,
she knew that her life was almost over,
she knew she could no longer be tough

She carefully picked up her razor blade,
and held it against her arm,
she knew when this was all over with,
nobody could any longer cause her harm

Soon words started appearing in her flesh,
as her razor blade got soaked with blood,
tears starting streaming down her face,
in one last flowing flood

Her head slumped down against her chest,
as her eyelids began to close tight,
the blood was still flowing from her arm,
the only symbol left of a well-fought fight

A story of painful memories,
was steadily and carefully wrote,
across her arm with a razor blade,
in the form of a suicide note

This note that she had written,
told of her life - hard and long,
and told of how she saw the world,
how everything had gone so completely wrong

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    This poem is terrific! I loved it, it made me cry.... very great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Yeh i agree with the ablove one
    i can relate to it heaps
    the fact that u can make so many people feel the same emotions as u is a sign of sucess! keep up the great work! :) p.s. i really like the flow and the rhyming of it!

  • 18 years ago

    by cassi

    Omg tht is lik totally how i feel i totally love it omg i totally said totally to much but ya it rocks

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookie

    Wow weird! haha no but pretty good i must say. i can see that u have talent a little longer and u could be ritting the next book of award winning poetry book lol
    god bless you
    xoxoxo justwant2smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Jax x lyn

    Wow that's so sad! That's all I can say about the content, but it was beautifully written! Keep it up, as I go cry! Lol!