I love the angle of this poem. It's such a typical topic, but you twist and make it your own, and make it so damn original that it's intimidating. I love your word choice too, it makes your work seem so much more mature than a lot of the other stuff that is out there. I hope everything is well with you and that you had a good Christmas and New Years.

Take Care,
Renee

Hey, this was a really great poem, I liked the repeating parts, it made it more.. dramatic or something. Please check out some of my new ones. it would be greatly aprechiated to have comments from such an amazing poet like you :)
Keep up the great work
-Kat

Your an insanely good writer... i don't give that kind of compliment often because it really takes a good writer to get me thinking and really feel the poem. Excellent job. Love your work. Hang in there:)