I Guess I Thought Wrong...

by AntiSocial16   Jan 3, 2006


I only laughed because I loved you
And I thought you loved me too
But I guess the smiles were fake
Cause I can feel my heart slowly break

I only told you secrets because I trusted you
And I thought you trusted me too
But I guess the comfort began to wear
Either that or it was never there

And I promised to always be there for you
Cause I thought you promised me too
But I guess that was just a lie
Much like many pulled over my eyes

And I only cried because I missed you
And I thought you missed me too
But I guess that I was wrong
My tears meant nothing all along

I'm looking for a new title, if you have ANY suggestions, let me know! Thanks for reading! *Antisocial16*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Good poem though it wasn't exactly excellent. The words were good and all but you seemed to be missing something about it. Perhaps a stronger flow.
    ~S3I

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Another good poem
    i really liked these lines
    "But I guess the comfort began to wear
    Either that or it was never there"

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Hmmm. This isn't your strongest, but I do still like the idea. Little cliche but It's one of those ones where alot of people can relate. Be careful of your flow though, it gets stifled sometimes.
    All in all well done.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really like this poem a lot, I feel exactly like that a lot of the time, well if you have time please rate and comment my poems too thanks:)

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