by Samantha
I really like this poem a lot, I feel exactly like that a lot of the time, well if you have time please rate and comment my poems too thanks:) |
Hmmm. This isn't your strongest, but I do still like the idea. Little cliche but It's one of those ones where alot of people can relate. Be careful of your flow though, it gets stifled sometimes. |
Another good poem |
Good poem though it wasn't exactly excellent. The words were good and all but you seemed to be missing something about it. Perhaps a stronger flow. |