Wow im speechless. Beautiful, you have so much talent.
On the beach
It'll wash away
The sand
The scars of time
Deep, powerful, and great imagery (at least to me) Keep it up and Take care XXXXX
JL

Oh I can really relate. I experienced this exactly after I broke up with my first boyfriend, it was unreal and I was in denial. This is very true, my only suggestion is that in the line "That door of past ajar" you might want to put "the" infront of past, because with out the article it makes past seem like an adverb to ajar which doesn't make any sence. But other than that Great work.

Great peice, very descriptive and full of feeling. very deep and strong

Wow really good poem. you have a lot of talent, keep writing i will read more of your poems when i have more time
polly