Lost Love

by xlovelostx   Jan 3, 2006


Every moment that passes by
I sit and wonder why
Why love is so unfair
One minute you've found it and the next it's simply not there
The days drag by
And at the end of each day I begin to cry
Love can be so hard to hold onto
I just want to be near you
Two people who care about each other
But who can't be with one another
How many chances do you get
Before you begin to regret
The decision you made that has torn my life apart

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  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    This has potential.. the attempt you made at rhyming has kinda cost you the poem tho.... it doesnt flow as well as it needs to... it was really good the first few lines.. but then you tried rhyming to much, you do have potential tho... just let the poem flow from you... all poems dont have to rhyme.. most of mine dont and ive gotten plenty of comments on them...
    keep it up!!! ur doing great!
    amanda