This was a beautiful poem.....i didn't think that it would end this way but that is what made it even more breathtaking....i loved the first and last stanza!!!! Great poem!!!
luv jess xoxo

This was a beautiful poem.....i didn't think that it would end this way but that is what made it even more breathtaking....i loved the first and last stanza!!!! Great poem!!!
luv jess xoxo

I enjoyed this poem. It was nicely written and I especially loved what you did with the first and last stanzas. Keep writing I love reading them!

My god, you have frequently commented my poems and love, I regret never reading more then that one of yours. you are amazing. 5/5, take care.

DDDAAAAAAAMMMMM******** that was great right there, by far one of the best i have ever read seriously that was AWESOME, that was just......im speechless, SUPERB job, excellent excellent excellent....5/5 no doubt

Excellent! I mean alot of feeling. A lot of emotions. Wow. Oh yeah I got my first award. Finally. It took me forever.

That was good and very sad. i love the emotion. 5/5

Aww thats so sad...well I guess thats why im reading in the sad poem area. Great work though I cant wait to read more. keep it up

Juls

Wow and another amazing poem! Very emotional! I don't know what I should say: it's simply indescribable and breathtaking!!!

Fantastic!! Great flow. POWERFUL message shining a light on what is so so dark and hidden. Well done!! 5/5! Thanks for your kind comments on My poem & EVERY comment good or bad means something to me!

I really like your poem, it was emotional ,true, yet sad at the same time your very good
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mia

Wow this one is so sad, im almost sitting here in tears, you painted such a vivid picture in my head, you have a great way of showing so much emotion in a piece i loved it your an amazing poet, think im gonna add you to my favorites..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow...thats was a wonderfully sad poem...5/5

This Is Suck A Great Poem,, Your Description Is Great! I Really Loved It... Very Sad Though,, I Hope To See More Of Your Fantastic Work Soon,,
Take Care,
Luv,
The Bell :]

OMG... That's so sad.

That was VERY touching. I could actually picture what was happening and the title was just as good and thought provoking as the actual poem...great job once again. DEFINATELY a 5/5!
~Midnight Sun

That was really sad, I liked it, but it scared me a little, but still, it was a great poem, i really enjoyed reading, good luck with future writing..

your faithful reader :P
POLAROID