Wow, this poem has so much feeling. This is a very powerful poem and well thought out. Beautiful job. So sad.

Thats so sad but very good

Thats so good, very powerful.
Keep up the good work!

Woah, mixed emotions in this.
You start out so happy and the atmoshpere is so nice and happy then *bam!* It all fall's apart!
Well done, Im truly sorry if this is true in anyway.
Keep it up, I'd like to read more from you, you could be a great poet =D

xD

Wow! thats really good. Its short but the emotion was so great and WOW i wanted to cry. I hope thats not true about you, if it is thats a horrible thing to happen. Great work

Juls

Soo very sad lot of feeling keep up the good work

Very powerful poem! Nice job!

Very sad but very good... powerful, keep it up!!!

I like the story style of this poem and of course the sad story of a boy who once loved. However though, I'd want to see more behind this, I feel that this is kind of brief. Still, maybe it's just me. =)

Nonetheless, a heartfelt piece. =)

She died because she got hit be drunk drivers

^^^ Fix the word be to by
It's very short but you get the meaning of the poem.. Great job...

Aw so sad
but good. :)

Hey, we're talking now.. i hope you didnt mind me reading this.

really good poem.. but really sad :o( x

Don't give up... and u will find the love of ur dreams... sometimes, things happen... unfortunately, we have to go on, no matter how much we hate it!

big hugs, love always,
michelle