This is amazing, and the imagery is really effective

Josh thank you so much for commenting on my poem and i'm glad you could relate to it. You also have really great poems I think my favorite is this one

Thanx 4 ur support!!!!!
anyway, this wuz really good....seriously...5/5

Thank you for commenting my friends poem.it means a lot!your poems are great!this one...5/5:)

Thx for commenting i like ur poem

That poem is one of the best i have read since i joined here and that was 2 days ago. Excuse my msn ppl are talkin to me. Hang on. But yeah what was i saying? Oh, yes. i joined in the hope to meet some one who has been stuck in the same problem. i have changed so much that i am actually listening to what people have to say rather than being a bully. Can't wait to read more of your poems Josh.
Bronwyn. xoxo

This poem is really good... 5/5