by Emma Jan 3, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
I mis those family-fun-days, |
by Bertha
I like your use of metaphors! |
by Macy
This is a great poem! I am so so so so so sorry you feelt his way! I hope everything works out for you! you are such a talented writer!! write more poems! I can't wait to read them! |
by TinyDancer46
Oh my gosh... Emma... I don't even know what to say. I hope this isn't true, and if it is then I'm always here to talk to. Man, you are such a great writer, I could really feel the emotion in this and it almost brought me to tears. Fabulous poem hun, and honestly I'm always here for ya. xoxo |
by Chris Boesen
I know how you feel. I dont really have the best relationship with my parents as of now, but wow you have alot of poems posted, I dont post very many, only the ones I feel that the public might understand haha the rest are personal. but yes I like end rhyming poems and your rhythm was pretty good on this one too |
by Heather
I love this poem.....it's the first of yours i've read ...if the others are half as good all i can say is WOW. |