I couldn't wait for a new poem, and here it is, it's amazing. Wow Emma you gave your all in this poem. It's so beautiful. And so sad =( I can relate to it. Very well done. One of your best. I loved it Emma. Very well done girl. I'm proud of you! -xxx- Lotsaa love

I love this poem.....it's the first of yours i've read ...if the others are half as good all i can say is WOW.

I know how you feel. I dont really have the best relationship with my parents as of now, but wow you have alot of poems posted, I dont post very many, only the ones I feel that the public might understand haha the rest are personal. but yes I like end rhyming poems and your rhythm was pretty good on this one too

Oh my gosh... Emma... I don't even know what to say. I hope this isn't true, and if it is then I'm always here to talk to. Man, you are such a great writer, I could really feel the emotion in this and it almost brought me to tears. Fabulous poem hun, and honestly I'm always here for ya. xoxo

This is a great poem! I am so so so so so sorry you feelt his way! I hope everything works out for you! you are such a talented writer!! write more poems! I can't wait to read them!

I like your use of metaphors!

keep writing on emma!