Steve... I'm speechless on this one. You've done a fantastic job! So heartfelt, so real and so emotional. I couldn't stop thinking, just look his way, look in front of you - you have all you ever need. Sadly it didn't happen, however it still had a great ending as there is nothing better in this world than a loyal, unselfish, loving, caring friend like this! Superb writing my friend, amazing!

Steven...I love your poem so touching and emotional! Great poem, soooooo fantastic my friend. Always take care and thanks for sharing it! ^_^ Many big hugs.

Great poem steve. beautifully put with grabbing emotions.

~Jacklyn

So heartfelt and filled with hope. Beautifully written....

Thanks for the comments, but I may still change this as I feel that there have been some rather repeated use of some words.

This is amazing, you did such a wonderful job. So full of emotion and its very sad, but still has that glimmer of hope. Just a very beautifully written piece.

This is sad, yet sweet, and so very beautiful. I know what it's like to have to stand quietly by and the love of your life doesn't even know the true depth of your feelings. The poem is pure perfection. It's filled with such quiet passion and heartache. I love it.

I love this poem....can't stop reading it!