I guess thats why we never spoke...

by PassionatelyMarla   Jan 3, 2006


I cut, i bruise, i bleed to insanity
i starve, i choke, guess why i never spoke?

doz an1c me?

i shout, i scream just let me be
i need, i want to be loved

doz an1c me?

i take my life, just to be free
i make my note, put it under your cloak

doz an1c me?

you knock on the door, i stood still
you ask what the hell?

now do you see me?

you scream, you shout come with me! you clean, you scrub

now do you see me?

we keep looking at the mistakes i make
we keep on looking at the notes i take

now do you see me?

i sit and cry, and watch you walk bay
you leave me hanging, you leave my heart banging

i guess thats why we never spoke...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Wow this is excellent. i love it too bits!!
    thnx 4 commenting on my work. it made my day:P now work dont seem so painful to go 2 *shakes fist* damn cafe...
    on a happier note well done this is really well written
    keep it up
    luv amy

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow, excellent. is it true? i hope not. thanks for the comments on my poems. they really mean a lot to me. stay strong,
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Katie~*

    This one is ok but its not my favorite

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    This is really powerful.. the words are really.. well they get in your face.. which is really good... but im not sure what you mean by some of it.. like the second to last stanza... we all??? that confuses me.. so if you decide to edit it do something with the way the sentences or lines are put together...
    good job tho
    amanda

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