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by Poetvoices   Jan 3, 2006


No one understands.
They can't see what I have seen.
"You're just crazy," they all say.
"You're confusing life with crazy dreams."

They won't understand.
No matter what I say.
This is when I feel voiceless
telling myself that tomorrow's another day.

No one understands
that if I could go back in time
I would've never met her
to save her wretched life.

They won't understand
until I can make them see
what I have seen through my journals
and through my crazy dreams.

This poem is based on my favorite movie, The Butterfly Effect. :D

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I Think I gave you every comment I could think of . So pat yourself on the
    back . You have me speechless and that is very, very rare . lol . Excellent
    job. Keep writting your magnificent poems

    Love ya
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    I havent seen the movie but now i want to.. lol ... i like the quotes u hav...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Very nice play on words. Enjoyed!

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I need help? Your stuff makes me think you are afraid to admit feelings you have, b/c you have to tack on 20,000 messages about "I don't really want this to happen." "That's not what I really mean." Get over it. No one on this site will judge you.

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