Nice... not to bad for the first poem.

Hey a wat it do, it C.los Main here, and that poem wasn't full of crap, it was good, and that other one about bleeding from ur wrist was a little too extreme, but that is love, it feels like the end of the world when its over, well check my poems out, they might cheer u up when ur down.

Aw, that really makes you think. Good poem. Keep up the good work
Megan