He Can't Save Her

by Darien   Jan 3, 2006


He Can't Save Her

The dark fire burning bright,
as black smoke grows thick.
On her bedroom floor she lies,
overdosed on pain killers.

She couldn't stand the pain,
heartbroken from her love lost.
He died many moons ago,
and left her all alone.

After his death she broke down,
ate nothing for days at a time.
She lost the only thing she loved,
and now she has gone insane.

Calming herself with many drugs,
she thought she was almost cured.
Until the day she heard his name,
she tried to hang herself but failed.

He was a hero in her eyes,
working for the fire department.
He was strong, bold and caring,
the perfect man for her.

The fire that sparked for them,
glows brighter in her room.
she can't escape the fire,
there is no one to save her.

Poison in her liver from drinking,
scars on her arms and wrist.
All consequences of losing her love,
who was engulfed by flames.

He can't save her now..

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  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Awww This Is So Sad! It Deff Brought A Tear To My Eye! Great Job! Your A Wonderful Poet!!!!I Only Wish To Be As Good As You One Day :D!!! Spectacular Job 5/5
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    After his death she broke down,
    ate nothing for days at a time.
    She lost the only thing she loved,
    and now she has gone insane.
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    I loved that stanza the most. I can kinda relate a little. It was a really really really good poem, with heaps of emotion. And I liked it, Alot. Tehe. 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    Wow, that's so sad, is that from experience or imagination?

  • 18 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    Well written. such a sad write... great imagery, flow.. a well crafted piece, very well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by miss scooby

    Hey

    Well, this was one of those poems you need a tissue for (YOU SHOULD HAVE WARNED ME} lol it was a incredibly writting poem and the way your are able to convey emotion in your words is really impressive....great job and i look forward to reading more of your work

    take care
    miss.scooby

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