Oh this is so sad! I loved this line "He died many moons ago". There's something about those words that really grabbed my heart. A beautiful write!

Darien,
I have read lost of poems to day...but this one really touched my heart. Amazing writing, well done my friend! Always take care ^_^

Beautifully written. Heartwrenching! So strong and powerful.

WOW, I am speechless..... beautifully written and very heartbreaking.

Very sad - Superb writing!

Wow thats like really sad good but sad. keep up the good work amzing write 5

What created this? Just a storie you made up, or reflecting actual event?

What a piece. that was beautifully sad. such a sad heartfelt n t0uching piece. very well written.g0od w0rds used. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk!! meant al0t t0 me! best wishes t0 y0u f0r a w0nderful new year!! keep up the great w0rk! =)

l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

*wipes tear from eye*

This poem is simply amazing! Wow... you're definitely very talented, and I really like the way you wrote this. It's so sad... hope it isn't true... =(

Really go poem but it really sad i kinda sobbed but im ok

Omg. this one is so beautiful i felt the shivers all over my body. did you loser your boi in a fire? if you dont mind me asking so. but your poem is really beautiful.

Okay yes..sorry i didnt look at the profile. i was going from what i saw. im sorry if i at all offended you. but yes the girl royally pissed me off. long story short. i told her something in confidance and she told everyone in my high school about it. so i have rights to being pissed. not saying that i will do everything it says in my poem. but i feel it, and want it. oops for being human.

Wow! very good, this poem really touched my heart, I can totally relate to it. Your a great poet, i love the way you write...keep it up

Hey

Well, this was one of those poems you need a tissue for (YOU SHOULD HAVE WARNED ME} lol it was a incredibly writting poem and the way your are able to convey emotion in your words is really impressive....great job and i look forward to reading more of your work

take care
miss.scooby

Well written. such a sad write... great imagery, flow.. a well crafted piece, very well done.

Wow, that's so sad, is that from experience or imagination?

After his death she broke down,
ate nothing for days at a time.
She lost the only thing she loved,
and now she has gone insane.
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I loved that stanza the most. I can kinda relate a little. It was a really really really good poem, with heaps of emotion. And I liked it, Alot. Tehe. 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Awww This Is So Sad! It Deff Brought A Tear To My Eye! Great Job! Your A Wonderful Poet!!!!I Only Wish To Be As Good As You One Day :D!!! Spectacular Job 5/5
Love,
Steph