Wow, this is dark. I like it.
Each stanza works so well, and as a whole I think this is a very well thought out poem. I tried and failed to pick a favorite line, I love the whole thing!
Well done, and keep writing cause I love to read your poems.
*VioletRaven*

Wow...I love this....once again. this is a real portrayel of marriage. Amazing as always hun!

I love this poem...especially since i detest marriage...great job hun..

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I love this poem. i is written so well.