by DBM Jan 3, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I've pondered diligently on how it would feel |
by Rebecca
Very original poem. Deep and very vivid with the imagery. The play with words was amazing! Great job! 5/5 |
by Aussie
Cool! cool way to format it, but odd. i can't do that. i don't think that hurd. it have a good rythme.:) |
by Silverbrant
I dnt no if u no this but lucifer actually means bringer of light - from when he was an angel blah blah... if u keep that in mind it works as well.. good structure.. works well.. |
The wording cool and the flow great...Really strange yet really cool. Nice. |
by Elynnka
Nice!! I liked the way it's written 5/5 |