Ann,
that's a very sweet but sad poem! I lovce it my friend...your poetry is always so amazing! Always take care.

"Dreams shattered
desires lost
memories crumbled
that's left
a broken heart.

thats my fav part =)

Memories crumbled
that's left
a broken heart.

great lines right there i really like the ending. this poem is simple short and sad but wonderfully writen. well done.

~Jacklyn

Written with great emotion...loved it! awesome write! keep up the good work as always

Very heartbreaking write Ann..... one so beautiful as you should not have to feel such pain..... I love you girlfriend.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Oh, Ann, that is so gorgeous... I miss you, love! You're still the incredible writer I know and love. Keep it up, Ann, you're always my internet angel!

Car

0h Ann, whats up girl? that was really sad n a t0uhing piece. very heartfelt g0od w0rds used th0ugh! very t0uching

l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
d0ra

Wow! Very heart crushing. Superb write!

This was a great poem, it was very touching. i know you probably get alot of requests but could you please read and comment on some of my poems and tell me what you think! it would be great.
-Kat

That was really sad, it reminded me of myself and wat im going threw, ur a great writer! amazing

This is so sad :(