Comments : The Picture Filled With Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    This is truely a different type of poem, but i loved it.. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cueball24

    Beautiful. Superb. I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Brilliant .....You really wrote this one to perfection . It was well written, with just the right amount of feeling . It held my full undivided attention . I really loved how in the end you let it be known that all three is the same guy . Because at first I was wondering why would all your ex boyfriends be in the same picture . lol . But you did a magnificent job . I can really relate to it, because sometime's I feel that way about my boyfriend .lol . Again great job .5/5

    Keep up the great work

    Lots of love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Good last to lines totally sorta changes the meaning of the whole thing good job hun keep it up 5/5 xox

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Long but SO worth my time!! nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey I really loved that. I loved how the three guys were one... lol... I didnt' actually think that that would happen... way to go... good twist... good flow... keep it up cause that was great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow i didnt c that commin,,,yet i kno exactly how u feel! gr8 work

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Great poem;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Pauly D.

    Wow, shadowed, exemplary work here. You've really just made me delve into some forlorn memories of mine except in a different circumstance. This was incredible, a joy to read, and a quintessential example of your talent...masterful, shadowed.

  • 18 years ago

    by LastPromise

    That was a great poem. The last two lines completely change what i thought the meaning would be and I really didnt see it coming, in some way reminded me of someone I know. It was great keep it up. 5* x-x-x

  • 17 years ago

    by **MIMI**

    That was really amazing and well written. The way you described this guy as three different people shows all the different sides to his personality, well done 5/5.