by Lexie
This is truely a different type of poem, but i loved it.. Great job! |
by Cueball24
Beautiful. Superb. I loved it. |
by Letty
Brilliant .....You really wrote this one to perfection . It was well written, with just the right amount of feeling . It held my full undivided attention . I really loved how in the end you let it be known that all three is the same guy . Because at first I was wondering why would all your ex boyfriends be in the same picture . lol . But you did a magnificent job . I can really relate to it, because sometime's I feel that way about my boyfriend .lol . Again great job .5/5 |
by ScarletHaze
Good last to lines totally sorta changes the meaning of the whole thing good job hun keep it up 5/5 xox |
by obsessedgurl
Long but SO worth my time!! nice job! |
by Ruthie
Hey I really loved that. I loved how the three guys were one... lol... I didnt' actually think that that would happen... way to go... good twist... good flow... keep it up cause that was great. |
Wow i didnt c that commin,,,yet i kno exactly how u feel! gr8 work |
Great poem;) |
by Pauly D.
Wow, shadowed, exemplary work here. You've really just made me delve into some forlorn memories of mine except in a different circumstance. This was incredible, a joy to read, and a quintessential example of your talent...masterful, shadowed. |
by LastPromise
That was a great poem. The last two lines completely change what i thought the meaning would be and I really didnt see it coming, in some way reminded me of someone I know. It was great keep it up. 5* x-x-x |
by **MIMI**
That was really amazing and well written. The way you described this guy as three different people shows all the different sides to his personality, well done 5/5. |