by Kelly Jan 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Daddy, where have you gone?, |
Wow that was really sad,,, keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!,,,i liked the flow of emotions and stuff throughout the poemr u able 2 check mine out,,,i could do wit some more critisim :) |
by cassi
Wow thts deep and sad but its really gd |
by Brookie
Wow tat was so sweet! aww so cute. keep it up! r these bout ur life? keep up the good work! |
by Nicole
This is a great poem 5/5. ur a wonderful poet. keep writing. |