by Brittany Jan 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
When you first kissed me my heart began to race. |
by Justin G
Its good..but u should go into more detail..dont stop so short. let it all out of your heart. to me it seems like there is more that u could have written. just let it flow. but it was good. keep it up |
by Brittany
Thank you :) |
HA! Exactly how every girl feels. Good one though. |
by RetiCent
Very nice, I'm jealous I cant write that good :P 5/5 |