When you Kissed me (A redo of WoW)

by Brittany   Jan 3, 2006


When you first kissed me my heart began to race.
You held me close and touched my face.

I felt like it was only you and me at that time.
My happiness was at the prime.

You changed my life so much.
You made me happy and scared with every touch.

It was all so confusing.
I found it a little amusing.

After that night I just knew you were the one.
You make life so very fun.

Lots of things were going through my head.
What might happen just ahead.

I've been through so much pain,
That it just wasn't easy to explain.

I just wanted to say you make me happy.
And sorry if I made this a little sappy.

But I love you.
And I cant wait until those words "I Do".

"I redid this one because it just didn't feel finished. It felt like something was missing but now I feel I'm through."

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  • 18 years ago

    by Justin G

    Its good..but u should go into more detail..dont stop so short. let it all out of your heart. to me it seems like there is more that u could have written. just let it flow. but it was good. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    Thank you :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    HA! Exactly how every girl feels. Good one though.

  • 18 years ago

    by RetiCent

    Very nice, I'm jealous I cant write that good :P 5/5