Well, I have unfortunately been cheated on, but he told me - he didn't lie. So I'm still with him and I'm still happy to be with him. It was a long time ago it happened, but reading this poem seemed to bring back all the hurt I had once felt. Which shows that your writing showed alot of feeling, emotion and even a great flow for the rhyming. It was really well done.

This poem is very good. your talented! 5/5

Personally, I have never known sadness of this kind, but I love the poemIt sounds as if there's maybe a little anger or resentment at the fact that the person cheated. Never happened to me, but I understand. The sadness of it is hitting me in waves. Excellent job, though.

Iv been cheated on and it hurts especially when you love the person, this poem was really good, the details and the way u explained the emotions were brilliant 5/5 scratch that i give it 10/5

Your very talented. Keep it up. I give it a 5/5.

Good dedication. It's nice to kno i am not the only one whose been lied and cheated on. Love never lies! So if they lie they're not love! Latas/ i rly enjoyed this poem.

LISSA

I havent been cheated on but i have been lied to and the feeling that results is not great...i love this one and cant wait to read the next one... i always comment on your poems because i want you to kno that i really love your poems and i comment on almost every poem i read... great job and keep it up
~Sandra~

This is another fantastic poem hun, you're very talented, and a BOY ha, wow sorry i'm not sexist but I dont really expect boys to have feelings or write beautiful poetry, ialways thought you were cruel but you proved me wrong heh, ohh and you're a drummer howw lovveeely we shud form a band mwahahaha my friend wants to form a band so she can cuuff the hot drummers and bassists but okay too much info kthx. prettypoeeeeem

That was really good, I felt the amount of emotion and pain you put into this poem, it made me anxious to read it all....that's a great thing to interest and lock your reader into you poem, it was so intense, I seriously loved it. Although some lines need question marks, and some words have a little grammar errors, you should fix them up because they tend to have a big effect. But yeah, amazing.....

Beautiful work...keep it up so i can read more from you...