Love the poem tyler. really made me think. it's me tori, i changed my name again...lol.i love your writing style. keep it up. looking forward to some more poems. i marked you as a favourite......luv ya!

Okay, maybe I'm just stupid (that's probably it), but I read this several times and I couldn't understand it completely.

"Will he be bad and help
Or be good like he should."

I don't get what what he'd be bad to help with.
I also didn't understand the spaceship reference, what was that for?
One other question, is the chief the "hobo dude"?

Maybe this is just a random poem, and I'm reading way too far into it. That's probably it. But if there is a meaning or something that I'm missing here, I'd love for you to explain it because I was fascinated by your poem, despite the fact that I'm a little confused. I'm going to rate it as a 5, just because it made me think so much.
~Jaime

Okay, maybe I'm just stupid (that's probably it), but I read this several times and I couldn't understand it completely.

"Will he be bad and help
Or be good like he should."

I don't get what what he'd be bad to help with.
I also didn't understand the spaceship reference, what was that for?
One other question, is the chief the "hobo dude"?

Maybe this is just a random poem, and I'm reading way too far into it. That's probably it. But if there is a meaning or something that I'm missing here, I'd love for you to explain it because I was fascinated by your poem, despite the fact that I'm a little confused. I'm going to rate it as a 5, just because it made me think so much.
~Jaime

(sorry for the double post)

(sorry for the double post)