Im proud of you hunny, you come along way and this is a superb poem, I love the format=)

Jenn

Nice poem. Thanx for the comments and your welcome for the comments that i leave. Hope to talk to you soon and I really like this poem too.

~Matt~

I like this poem hun..the message was so..i duno hurt...u displayed i well.
take care
>torn -x.x.x-

Nice poem Joc...i really liked this one
5/5

Jammal

=) LOVES IT!!! i really lyked this poem!! ttyl kk

Hey joc, love the poem especially when you say we're alllookin for personal discovery, it's brilliant, by the way thanks for commenting on my poem, appreciate it ;).