Red Winter Snow

by Mollie   Jan 3, 2006


The dead cold of winter
Brings its gray days
Another of lifes splinters

Peaks of mountains in the hase
Glistening with winters gliter
The snow of summers crave
Is what becomes us all bitter

In the mornings new fair light
Crimson red spread through the sky

The snow begins its mornings flight
It paints the sky into its mind
Reflecting it just as bright
Until the day that winter dies.

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  • 18 years ago

    by FallenAngel44

    Thanx 4 the comment!
    4/5
    Really good but try using synonyms 4 words that u use often.

    Luv alwaiiz
    SoccerLova47

  • 18 years ago

    by ratchild666

    Youre right this is excellent for a quick poem, my only "critisism" is that you right more, because i would love it to be longer. you are very talented and the imagery in this poem is beautiful.
    stef/xx