Beautiful... i like this part the best
I WILL FIND MY WAY OUT OF
THE MAZE THAT IS YOUR HEART
I WILL VENTURE INTO THE WORLD
WITH MY OWN HEART TORN APART

i wish i can let go of my feelings that easily.

Wow do I know just how this feels very deep keep it up 5/5

I love this poem...its sooo good. lolz...u r the best writer in the world...well i feel ya pain...and i know what u going thru...u just have to stay strong and try to live ur perfect life even if the ppl inside it aren't so perfect...well i love ya
-preciosa

Hey darl. a meaningful p0em fr0m the heart t0uching lines. h0pe things w0rk 0ut. g0od j0b

l0tz 0f l0ve/ d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

Oh my gosh how do you keep writing such amazing poems?! I love this! If this is about you then I wish ya the best of luck in moving on. You've got the strength to do it, and I'm always here to help ya get through it. Great poem hun!

Nice work. Emotional poem. Love is defidently one of the most confusing emotions one can feel. Excellent job.
xoxo

Wow thiz iz a beautiful poem i love ur use of wordz it got mi a lil teary eyed over here tho lol well ur doin a gr8 job ur obviously a talented writer keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!5/5

All i can say is...DAMN! This is perfectly said, reminds me (and i think many other people) of my first love, only lasted a month but your poem says it all. I LOVE it. your so talented keep it up!