Omg this was brilliant!!!! I loved it!!! Sad but oh so beautiful!!! I'm gona keep a look out for your other one!!! the concept of this poem was amazing!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!
luv jess xoxo

Oh my gosh, such a sad twist at the end... it makes me so unhappy to think of all the scumbags out there who abuse other people or kill them. Ugh. Great writing though, hun. Keep up the amazing work