I am soooooooo proud of you! its really good. its beautifull and simple. i love how it flows

A very good poem. It's good to see there are teenagers who keep their faith strong. Don't ever let that go, no one can take it away from you. Keep it strong, and it will keep you strong.

I like this one alot, it inspires every one to keep pressing on no matter how tough life get's, God will alway's be there to catch you when you fall.