Comments : The Heart Broken Joke

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    That was really good. I love how that poems relates to my life, and many others. I also like how you worded the poem and your not afraid to show how that you feel there needs to be more people like that in this world

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That was a very interesting poem David....I like how you ended every stanza...nice writing....and hope to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    Truely amazing.