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by july Jan 2, 2004
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Should i take the knife and with it my life i can almost see the light. me heart is full of fright in this lonely night i use to think of daises. now i think of why's and maybe's. I thought i was going to be youre wife. and i thought it was true but you shot a dart and it went directly through my heart. so now i lay in the floor and in one two three you left out the door. so tonight am all alone with no concerns or why's and maybes' because i took the knife and with it my life. |
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20 years ago
by july
thnxs alot is well im depresed but instead of really killing myself i rather write it down on paper
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20 years ago
I read some of your other poems and their was no key to it. But this one stands out of all of thema nd if i may say good job on it . It was written greatly and it speaks out to the meaning and how it feels. When your in that stage you think nothing but the knife which is the only one that cares. Since i know that this poem is not true because your not dead unless ghost are real and can type; then i would like to say it really great that you can picture it happening to you . Since you did this know about what the feeling is like when your down and blue do think of the knife and remember this poem so you don't coommit sucide.
Anyways good job again. I would love to hear from you.
Aways,
lyssa
