by xX-jess-Xx Jan 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Dreamless sleep and, |
by melinda
I like the different style of writting u used in this poem. i really enjoyed it. 5/5 |
by Void
Another flawless one. No rhyme scheme, but great flow |
This is a really good poem!!! I agree with britt ^^^^ this repetition works really well!! And so did the questioning!!! It had this feeling to it that made me just want to keep reading!! You have talent!! |