Don't be fooled

by xX-jess-Xx   Jan 4, 2006


Clear away the cobwebs,
and take away the pain.
Gaze at the look in my eye,
and see that we're the same.

Take away your guard,
lift up your shield of steel.
Bring back your warm emotion,
that enables you to feel.

I guess that I'm just like you,
My smile says my life is swell.
But i tremble and shake,
inside my fragile shell.

Don't be fooled by my facade,
I've worn it now for years,
cause often just below my smile,
My throat is full of tears.

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliant poem, full of expressina nd very well written

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Really well written adn full of very strong expression.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by melinda

    Once again i am amazed by ur writting. i wish i could write liek you!! lol. great job hunnie!

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Wow! I really liked that one. Definately a 5/5 and no complaints. Great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I rlly liked it. nice wording and presentation. keep writing. plz comment on some of mine if u get the time.

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