I love this poem, your choice of words is great!!

Wow...great work. Thats some questions that go through others mind as well. I think many call relate so keep up the amazing work.

Juls

Aw i felt that way before its really sad
but everything will be ok. :)
great job

Very nice job! your words all seemed to flow very well and everything just seemed to fit! keep it up! i'll try and read some more of your poems very soon...

sammie

This is pretty sad..i like sad poems...i can usually relate to them....though the rhyming was kinda funny and forced....the one where you rhymed bloke w/ coke made me giggle....just b/c i never woulda thought of that....so please dont take n/e offence...thanks for the comment and vote

No Offence taken! I love honest comments. In my writting I usually like to add a little but of my personality, my silly side! I admit i was desperate for a few things to rhyme, but it seemed to rhyme ok... Never be afraid to tell me the truth! Every bit of it will help me along the way! Thanx

Its weird how some people move on so fast leaving you sitting in the dust.. great poem i relly enjoyed it
xXx court xXx

This is soo good! I loved it.