by Nicholas Kerst Jan 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Don't bother with her, |
That was good. It lacked something in the middle but overall I thought it was cool. The interesting point is how one part is trying to show the other what happens. Sounds like a neverending cycle. But I'm rambling. Good write though it wasn't up to par with some of your others. Still I enjoyed it. |
by Sammi
Wow I really liked it... powerful |