Wow.... that's really sad....
it's true to life which really makes it so much more heartbreaking. Great Work Ramy.
Your Friend, Suzie

Amzing work, this poem was brilliantly written. There was so much feeling in this poem.

I can really feel the emotion in this poem, i was so engrossed i didnt even realise how long it is!!

Very well expressed.... my father was a veteran as well... don't give up... on your inspiration and dreams.

big hugs,always,
michelle