by Raven Roth Jan 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I wish you would disappear. |
by Pure Silence
Nice poem, Im loving the sheer hate in this poem, well done expressed nicely=) and thankyou for the comments they mean alot to me annnnnnnd! I hang out on neopets too!!!!! lol im a major dorky 16 year old but hey lol, my user name there is Canada02 =) w00t ttfn hunny keep it up and if you need anything you know how to find me |
by Lexie
This poem is like you are just yelling at someone. It doesn't reflect the saddness that it should. Keep writing though. I really liked some of your others. |
by NissY
To be Honest, this one is missing on something, am not quite sure what it is... it overly states your emotions but babe I know you can do better. |
by Sammi
Excellent... I really liked that. |