Excellent... I really liked that.

To be Honest, this one is missing on something, am not quite sure what it is... it overly states your emotions but babe I know you can do better.
I read your other poems and they were great.

Keep it up...

This poem is like you are just yelling at someone. It doesn't reflect the saddness that it should. Keep writing though. I really liked some of your others.

Nice poem, Im loving the sheer hate in this poem, well done expressed nicely=) and thankyou for the comments they mean alot to me annnnnnnd! I hang out on neopets too!!!!! lol im a major dorky 16 year old but hey lol, my user name there is Canada02 =) w00t ttfn hunny keep it up and if you need anything you know how to find me

Much Love
Jenn