This poem is beautiful....i love how you didn't rhyme...it was a great change and even with no rhyming it still flowed really nicely!!! Keep it up!!!
luv jess xoxo

That is so sweet!!!! You did an awesome job!!!! 5/5

I love the fact that this poem doesnt rhyme...a lot of mine dont rhyme but people still like them...great job!!! EXCELLENT!!
~Sandra~