Ooouh! YAY! I'm the first to comment! and vote! Wo0t! -feels special- :]. Lol anyways moving on... I like your poem. It's different. I like the whole idea of how you made it with flowers. (=. It's a sweet poem. 5/5 for uniqueness Lol. (= anyways tata type to you in the chat. -waves- bye!

-Passing

Hey,
Quite an interesting piece of work, as commented earlier, Unique and skillfully written with such passion. it protrudes far more than what you intended...

Good Stuff, Keep it up...

This is a good poem....i give u a major 5/5 lol :)

This poem is Breath taking! I can really relate to it! 5/5!

Lol. sorry I took so long to comment back, I forgot. Anyways this is a great poem, it flows so well. This is my favorite part:
It was time for love
to exit our bodies
For our paths in life
should rechosen

Once again very beautiful poem...hope to read the rest of yours.

Excellent job Juls . This poem was deep . It held me captive through the entire poem . Another magnificent work of art . Keep up the good work Goddess . lol

love ya
Letty