IN MY DREAMS

by myshiningstar14   Jan 4, 2006


In my drems
Do you know what i see?
Whatever it is just believe.

Please no more screams,
you are everything to me.
And I shall not decieve.

We shall achieve
and forever reciecve
far beyond what we see.

The key
is not to leave
this is my plea
for you to forever be
in my dreams.

*umm yeaa enjoy the stanza kinda new...jus foold round wit this one...tell me what you think. XXLISSA

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Short Simple but great
    5/5 as usualy
    ttyl PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

    also click on see more poems when you click on my profile i have 92 poems submitted...so you can check em all out and stuff

  • 18 years ago

    by angie A

    Very wonderful! loved it 5/5

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